#3 Mr. RedSox will hold a second wedding ceremony with the same woman.

Our school's director, Mr. RedSox, will ____ back to his home country tomorrow to hold a wedding ceremony, and it will be his second wedding  ceremony with the same woman.

Because the last wedding ceremony was destroyed by some vicious participants, it was a catastrophic event as he said.  Of course, his wife became very indignant.  As a result, unfortunately, he was obliged to hold a wedding ceremony again since his wife tried to indict those participants.

I think that he is competent enough to be a good leader of _____ household. And, his decision was politic.

I would like to designate him as the best _______ competent husband.

Mr. RedSox, I am sorry for fabricating a story of your wedding ceremony so fun.

I assert that you are ____ very competent husband and school director.

By the way, the wedding ceremony is ____ very crucial event for almost all women.

In Japan, the average budget of the wedding ceremony is about $35,000.

It is almost as same as the average Japanese men's annual salary. 

To devote that much money on only one day, technically just a few hours, is very absurd.

I can assert that many male people would agree with my opinion.

I wonder why women are absorbed in the wedding ceremony and what is the world average budget of the wedding reception.

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#2 KJ will be a father soon

One of my classmate, KJ, will be a father soon.
He is from Japan and left his pregnant wife in Japan.
An expected date of baby born was next week or later, but this evening, he got a call from his wife and was told that she had a water broke so that a baby will coming out so soon.
He seemed to be upset since it is earlier than his expectation.
He must be very busy and sensitive right now.

Getting marriage, leaving successors to next generation and breeding them are our inherent desires!?
According to the book, which I have been reading since last week, getting marriage can be eliminated from above of those inherent desires but there is no ecological evidence.  The book said that a marriage does not have so long history as we think.

By the way, having ____ new baby would be one of the most impressive moments in our life.
Holding a baby on arms and feeling _______ heart beating _______ is  ______ precious time.

KJ will leave Boston on tomorrow early morning.
I guess that he is preparing to go bank to Japan and to become a father right now.
He must be brisk.  He said he might _____ back to Boston on May 6th, but he might not come back here because he would not be able to leave his son in Japan.
If so, we should acknowledge that he is a good father without flattery.

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#1 Clam Chowder vs Rice Pudding

Last night, I ate a clam chowder at seafood restaurant.
It was the first time to try it since honesty speaking I do not like clams and other shellfishes.
It was a big step to become a Bostonian since clam chowder is one of significant foods for Bostonian.

I also tried oysters.  Those were really nice.
As you know, oyster is one of shellfishes so it would not be _____  ___ my favorite foods, but somehow I like only fresh oysters.
Incidentally, it would be a great nourishment to recharge my energy.

Actually, we were supposed to go to a Brazilian restaurant because one of our teachers, who is from Brazil, recommend us to try a rice pudding.
Rice pudding, it sounds very interesting.  I would love to try it!
Unfortunately, our boss's request was ____   ___  seafood restaurant and her request was the most decisive because defiance against _____ boss might lead us ____   ___ deadly ending.  We were not eligible to choose…  We had better to be compliant subordinates.
Trying a rice pudding is still ____ ongoing  project.  The deadline of this project should be scheduled as soon as possible because I don't want to make it as a pending project.

During the dinner, my boss had been addressing about knowledge of wines, English, and so on.
The historical background of Japanese table manner was ___ very interesting topic.
Since I came to Boston, I have been feeling that I am a representative of Japan and my understanding of Japanese culture is superficial.   I could not explain why a glass for Japanese sake is smaller than ____ usual beer glass or a wine glass.  I was ashamed of myself.
My boss talked us about that story like a comedic storyteller.
I have noticed that a skill of storytelling is very significant for me as an envoy.
The dinner's atmosphere was very good and there was no tension.
I could understand why new ideas tend to be easily emerged during daily conversations than seemingly serious conferences.

Any way, it was ___ very precious dinner. (this is not sarcastic.)

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• Mistakes related to prepositions are highlighted in green
• Mistakes related to awkward structures or poor word choice are highlighted in orange